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I'd Give Up Foreverby *Cheshires-love

Traditional Art / Drawings / People

And I'd give up forever to touch you
'Cause I know that you feel me somehow
You're the closest to heaven that I'll ever be
And I don't want to go home right now

And all I can taste is this moment
And all I can breathe is your life
'Cause sooner or later it's over
I just don't want to miss you tonight

And I don't want the world to see me
'Cause I don't think that they'd understand
When everything's made to be broken
I just want you to know who I am

And you can't fight the tears that ain't coming
Or the moment of truth in your lies
When everything feels like the movies
Yeah you bleed just to know you're alive

And I don't want the world to see me
'Cause I don't think that they'd understand
When everything's made to be broken
I just want you to know who I am

And I don't want the world to see me
'Cause I don't think that they'd understand
When everything's made to be broken
I just want you to know who I am

And I don't want the world to see me
'Cause I don't think that they'd understand
When everything's made to be broken
I just want you to know who I am
I just want you to know who I am

Forever.

_{This is Eric(Maroon) and Toby(brown).
My and 's own characters. We are writing a story for them. I can't tell you how dear to my heart these two are.
Uh, I worked really hard on this, so please give me feedback. A fave would be greatly appreciated.}

Critique by ~TailsOfLightning Dec 26, 2012, 8:48:05 PM

I do like the picture yes. But I hate to point it out, the right person... is a little off. the ear is freaky low. Knowing you, if these are btoh buys, the right is also quite feminine. And I'm supposing that that's a touge.. that I'm trying real hard not to recognize as a lip. One is blushing a whole ton more that the other, btu i'm sure trhat's something to do with character personality
Overall... pretty..pretty pretty picture.
though I like the left side alot better
Now I feel like an ass....................Gomenasai, Mianhe, Sorry, Lo siento.
0_0 Sorry

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~graciegirl150 Dec 30, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

YOU ARE A GENIUS. I could never, NEVER do something that amazing. I love you Heather ^_^

*Cheshires-love Dec 31, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

heehee.

=Pryate Dec 27, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

Awww, it's really cute! I love the shyness of the characters and the tenderness emanating from this pic. Sorry not to give you an art critique as requested, but I hate to do this.

*Cheshires-love Dec 29, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

Thanks. ^^ I worked pretty hard on making them adorable.

Alas, it is still flawed.

=Pryate Dec 29, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

Ahah, nothing is perfect, and perfection is very subjective in art. The most important is emotion.

*Cheshires-love Dec 29, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

-_-

You know all.

~Vallaton1 Dec 27, 2012

cute aaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwww

*Cheshires-love Dec 27, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

I'm really happy you like it. This comment means a lot. <3

~Vallaton1 Dec 28, 2012

you are welcome

~WizardPhoenix Dec 27, 2012 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

so sweet :3

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